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Innocenta: Chapter 19 by ~StarSophi:iconStarSophi:


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> Chapter 19
>> Memories & Feelings

Oh yeah people, here it is another one! Sorry for those who were expecting it sooner like I promised but things always happens lol. Anyway, maybe I can compensate you in the next one. >3
Talking about the chapter itself... Phew, I'm still surprised with myself about remembering things from some past chapters. XD I know, I'm writing them and I need to know everything, but it wouldn't be abnormal to check them in that situation rofl. Well, FIGHTS! Finally...XD Even tho it may not be for a long time but oh well, not bad hein? More mysterious situations and...NEW CHARACTER! Ok, I must confess that I was needing one to do the work of Nazomi and she just helped me. xD Credits to ~StarSins for that!
Anyway, I'm feeling sad for my dear Teiris... and Dominion is just sweet! /moved Ahahah, well, ahem... New things are revealed! I think...but yeah, Dominion just gave some important information... I guess I'm having a lot of things inside and someday I will have a huge list of stuff to not forget about them all. n.ñ

What will happen to Teiris? Well, LET'S KICK THE ASS OF THE MYSTERIOUS CHAR AND SAMAEL! >( My dear Teiris can DIE! D:

Oh well...I must say that this chapter was inspired in the collab I will make with =Lineith with the same name (given by me). You can see the picture here: [link]

And yeah, "Iliuzija Pasaulis" is "Illusion World" in Lithuanian! :3

Well, nothing else to say! Enjoy it! >3

Chapter 18: Somewhere I Belong... <- Previous -- Next -> Chapter 20: Revelations

Innocenta: Last Apostle's Promise © ~StarSophi

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:iconstarshiva:
Wow!!! This is one of the most dramatic chapters ever!!! Samael took the action to high levels and now Teiris paid the prize...I hope a price too high. The Mysterious character is active than ever and the introduction of the chara Nozomi is quite priceless. When the dark Angels in the offensive, this will be a strong challenge to our courageous party. Maybe Rasuto can release his anger and turn the battle to their favor...The revelation to Raphael is quite shocking and it seems that anyone of the party can be his sister assassin!!! Very strong points in this chapter and a pack of emotions floating all over the place!!!

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Remember... in the dark you can see the light even more bright
:icontricialeonheart:
definitely one of the best epic chapter u've written my friend!! serious fight, let's kick some ass baby~ XDDD i definitely loved to use 'unique'and some other foreign language as part of the element in my story as well... it's sure awesome~~ TwT keep up the good work my friend!! i cant wait to read the next chapter where rasuto unleashed his dark power and become the dark angel :excited::excited:

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ソウルイーター + P e r s o n a . 3
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parece que tenia razon XD

good chapter, can't wait for the next one.
Nazomi sure did a good appearance XD

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I am the black void. I am the cold steel. I am the just sword. With blade in hand shall I reap the sins of this world, and cleanse it in the fires of destruction. I am OMEGA. The End has come!

"I went to see the devil, now its your turn!"
:iconstarsophi:
Awww, thank you! ^^ Yeah, indeed it was the one of the most dramatic ones hahaz! I wanted to be kinda...epic? O.o x3 Indeed Teiris took the price...a high one...thanks to that damn Samael..T_T I hope she can survive hoho...D: But she will since she's strong neh? >3 Well, the mysterious character is doing his things ahahah and Nazomi needed a great entrance! The most sexy one! LOL! The group is what all people loves! The best one when they unite their strength hoho! And I loved Raphael to do his moves. xD
Rasuto will be epic in the next chapter hoho, can't wait to write it really. >3 And I hope that the revelation for Raphael starts great dear. ^^ I'm doing my best for Raphael to be epic. >3 Did he loved the caress of Teiris? >D XD And more mysterious situations! I wonder who killed his sister...anyone can be the assassin, now who is him? D:
Thanks a lot for you sweet comment! I'm glad that you loved that much! Now the story is gaining it's points and emotions...also the center of all story! I hope I don't forget all the details or I'm doomed. XD

Again, thanks a lot for the comment sweetie! :glomp:

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Life is one complete and constant succession of several new beginnings! And if you want to survive, you need to be strong!

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:iconazngrrl:
Oh Dominion -////- :heart:
:iconstarsophi:
Kekekeke...he's so sweet neh sis? ^^ :heart:

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Life is one complete and constant succession of several new beginnings! And if you want to survive, you need to be strong!

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:iconstarsophi:
lol, wow, the M.C. sure had more attention than what I was expecting. >3

Thank you! And yeah, I was needing someone like Nazomi. It's a great character! :)

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:iconstarsophi:
Ahahahah, thanks a lot my friend! :glomp: Yeah, I kinda fell that too! It's the fist chapter that have some serious fight without doubts. XD So yup! Let's kick some ass! XD Awww, well, your fanfic inspired me to make some epic stuff and here it is! I loved the word in Lithuanian and decided to use hoho. >3
Yeah!!! I can't wait to write it! >D Rasuto finally unleashed his power for the first time so here it comes our sexy from the last art I made! :eyes: XD :excited:

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:iconstarsins:
TEIRIS! i will bow you foreverrrrrrrrrrr!! ahahahah, kidding, kidding!! now i really want that mysterious character for nazomi ahahahah!! ok, now i was really joking BUT!! oh my god!! i love how you made her to appear and i loved samael ohohohohoh!!! i love samael now!! he's my sexy babe!!
anyway, i have my ideas for the mysterious character because he really his finally showing some things hihi!! and it seems he is not gay!! woooooooo!!! can't wait for the next chapter!! the story is getting very exciting and epic!! dominion is absolutely sweet and teiris too!! both are really cute!! i love their personality's ahahah!! nice fights and writing as always!! kick samael??? noooooo!! but ya, poor teiris. . .i really like her to don't make her to die!!

keep it up dear!!

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